I must say that I’m a little confused about where your work on the European Union went. That seemed like a really great promising paper, but I don’t see anything related to that. I really think you’ll need to back up and redo this for many reasons. It is pretty vague, I do not see a clear thesis, and most importantly, it falls outside the realm of this class.

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The sixteenth-century falls outside of the realm of this class.

This addresses “you”; this should be avoided.

This is unclear. What is being remembered?

Footnotes, not in-text citations.

Don’t reference this as a report.

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